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Literature Text
A summer chrysanthemum
Wilting ever so quickly
Winter comes so cruelly
Adore this dying flower
Wilting ever so quickly
Winter comes so cruelly
Adore this dying flower
A moral poem to relish your youth while you can, in the form of a Chinese jueju. It was tough, because each line had to consist of 20 characters (brushstrokes in Chinese, another word for letters in English), and I had to keep each line at 7 syllables each.
Tell me what you think, please.
EDIT: Fixed some stuff
Tell me what you think, please.
EDIT: Fixed some stuff
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I love Chrysanthemums. They are beautiful, and I wish we could have them where I live. 
This was a beautiful little read.
This was a beautiful little read.